Instructions
Make a full revision of your essay. Consider feedback left by others, and feedback left by your instructor. TEST each paragraph to ensure it has a topic sentence that supports the thesis, full development, and transitions. Consider the organization of your main points. Add in your paragraph that uses a quote a from the textbook to support your point, and make sure to use appropriate transitions so that it does not read like a choppy add-in, but like a seamless part of the essay. Include the Works Cited at the end of the essay.
