The professor gave feedbacks for the last paper, “Strategy in Practice Assignment 1.” This professor is very hard on plagiarism. Please be careful about that. Thank you!
” Five Forces Analysis of the Toy Industry: 45/50
??? The “substitute products” force is deemed “high to high” for the toy industry.
There are many substitutes for toys, including movies, books, videogames, sports, etc.; unfortunately, you fail to mention such substitutes in your discussion.
Five Recommendations for The LEGO Group: 40/50
recommendations lack specificity
For future assignments, please write entirely in continuous prose (i.e. no numbered or bulleted lists).”
