hi, Ive written a draft, I need that to be worked on again please. Its a letter I have written for my girlfriend. 1. we are in a long distance 2. she has been there for me through everything no matter what 3.she has changed me so much after coming into my life 4. she’s also a strong reason for our relationship to work too 5. we video call everyday, so there is constant communication 6. I want to marry her 7. grow old with her and spend the rest of my life with her 8. every time I see her after a few months, it gives me hope and re assurance 9.and please add whatever you think isn nice and romantic please re word the highlighted bits, I find them kinda off I feel what I’ve written sounds kinda weird, could you please fine tune it for me, I have marked in red on the word document, I have uploaded. please make it seem romantic and take out the weird excessive parts please. Thanks
